Bounty Hunter II - Desert, by Joe

Hello there!
A freind of mine who I mentioned about on my PDII update, decided to voluntarily draw an illustration of my game Bounty Hunter II (because he's played through the first and the second one).
Keep in mind this drawing may reveal possible spoilers since it is based on somewhere pretty late in the game.

Uploaded with his permission.

Draft version: Where's Peast's goatee?

Finished version, a very hot and bright day in the desert

Although this artwork looks very detailed and vibrant, I do have a few critiques to make of his artwork:

• He missed the collar of Peast's suit.
• The suit does not look hard enough and is more like a cardigan.
• There are no buttons on the shirt
• The lighting on the airship needs to look more bright (i.e. putting light oranges)
• The ear looks like strawberry jam toast.
• The hands on the gun look a bit like they are going to slip off it.
• Peast's face could do with a little bit more expression, for example the brows looking more furrowed to show that he's angry and ardent about getting his money back.
• The structure of Peasts face looks flat, the nose looks like a skeleton rather than a human beings'.